Kalel
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Post by Kalel on May 5, 2005 19:38:55 GMT -5
...and since trying to paste it into this thread creates unreadble garbage, here's the link to Fanfiction.net! PLEASE let me know what you think! www.fanfiction.net/s/2381557/1/ |
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Post by ktfanfic on May 5, 2005 20:35:56 GMT -5
Good job! I really enjoyed that!!!!!! ;D
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Post by MelMac on May 5, 2005 22:03:47 GMT -5
Kalel, I've enjoyed reading both your stories. Great way to expand on an idea. Keep it up.  |
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Kalel
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Post by Kalel on May 6, 2005 8:24:45 GMT -5
I really apprecviate the positive comments... it's nice to actually have someone reading my work! I'm halfway through the second book of a trilogy I'm writing and, being in East Tennessee, can't hook up with an agent... at least this way, I can keep my hand in and get SOME kinda feedback!
Again, thanks!
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Post by ThatGirl on May 7, 2005 10:13:57 GMT -5
Great job! I really enjoyed your story. |
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Post by Stargazer on May 7, 2005 10:30:11 GMT -5
Two BIG thumbs up!  |
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Post by mom2jared on May 7, 2005 15:29:50 GMT -5
I absolutely loved it! I loved how you had Pam and Ralph fighting about Kevin.
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Kalel
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Post by Kalel on May 7, 2005 21:51:04 GMT -5
Thanks, mom!  And, Happy Mother's Day! As to your comment, like most of us here, I always hated that the show pretty much ignored Kevin's existance halfway through the run... and since I had Tony up and out of his teen years, I figured Kevin had to be into his! Having two teenagers in my house... well, every good story has conflict, doesn't it?  I'm hoping to make another attempt at a GAH fanfic, expanding from the end of "Partners"... even have an opening: Tony knew. Only Tony knew that Tony knew. He didn't know how and he didn't know why, but Tony knew about the suit. ;D |
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Post by MelMac on May 7, 2005 22:42:14 GMT -5
I know what you mean. Probably because I was little when the show first aired, I didn't remember Kevin until I watched the DVDs. They could have given at least some explanation as to why he wasn't there, such as Alicia having custody or he was visiting her.
You have a good teaser for your next fanfic, and I look forward to reading it. BTW, have you had a chance to look at the one on this site? MyTatuo found the link and posted it in the "Fan-fics?" topic. Looking at my post trying to help you out, I realized that I made as much sense as my crazy computer.
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Kalel
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Post by Kalel on Aug 23, 2005 17:34:03 GMT -5
I've finally finished the next chapter in my "Partners" fanfic. The link is: www.fanfiction.net/s/2548473/1/I hope you enjoy it and, yes, please tell me what you think... but, bear in mind that given the choice between constructive criticism and flattery, I prefer constructive flattery! |
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Post by MelMac on Aug 23, 2005 23:21:16 GMT -5
Just read the second part of "Partners," and it is very good. I had been wondering when you were going to expand on the teaser you gave a while back, as it was an interesting premise. Look forward to reading the second chapter. |
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And, Happy Mother's Day! 