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Post by billswoman on Nov 15, 2005 20:04:14 GMT -5
Well, you asked for it, you've got it! It's rated T, but stay tuned. For those who want it, there'll be an MA rated ending as well. I'll indicate when the time comes when to continue on FF.net under T (13+) or go to the adult fanfic site to finish it in MA (18+) rated mode. Here's chapter one: www.fanfiction.net/s/2662215/1/Chapter two is ready to go too; simply change that last 1 in the URL to 2 to get the next chapter. It doesn't always post right away on FF.net. Chapter three is about to begin. I'm actually hoping to write this all in one sitting. Summary: "The one we've all been waiting for on the GAH board. A Bill and Pam story. While Ralph's gone, Bill and Pam team up to save something very important to them both."
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Post by billswoman on Nov 16, 2005 6:54:04 GMT -5
Oopsie, my b.... I made a character named Alicia of all things (gads, what was I thinking??) So if you're reading this story, and it says Alicia, that's been fixed; I did a replace and turned her into Kathryn.
I guess I was channeling Ralph's ex-wife or something.
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Post by HoudiniDerek on Nov 16, 2005 8:21:43 GMT -5
There you go...have Bill get it on with the ex. Leave Perfect Pam alone. She already had to shack up with Ralph for crying out loud.
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Post by billswoman on Nov 16, 2005 8:51:32 GMT -5
LOL, aw... maybe I should introduce a character named Derek for Pam to be fascinated with! It'd be your own Marty Stu, HD!
Hmmm, well, I imagine you're not going to read this, HD, but I wish you would. You'd know Pam's characterization, after all; I think I'm doing well staying in character for both her and Bill (Ralph's gone to Las Vegas, so he's a non-issue, at least for now).
Hey, in my wild half-asleep fantasies, I envisioned a THIRD ending: Ralph founds out and kills them both, muwhahahahahaha!!
Scenario: Pam calls Ralph's hotel a few times, and he's always unavailable (this is really going to be in the story). Ralph gets the messages from the hotel clerk, and tries to call Pam back. Her office: "Oh, she's on vacation," her secretary, Bill, tells him. Ralph's like, WTF? He calls Bill at the FBI office, "Oh he's on vacation." Ralph: DOUBLE WTF??
My girlfriend and my best friend and partner are on vacation, without even telling me? While I'm gone? Something aint' right here....
Ralph returns to L.A. after the conference ends, goes directly home and puts on the suit, and guess what he does? He holographs in on Pam & Bill! Oh, mergatroyd!
The next day, the paper reads:
FBI Agent, Local Attorney, Found Dead In Execution Style Murders!
A few days later, the paper reads: Whitney High School Teacher Missing After Vegas Conference
See? I'm a sick f..., ain't I?
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Post by MrsMaxwell on Nov 16, 2005 12:03:09 GMT -5
Damn! you write fast woman! Great job, keep it going! I like how you suck all those references to Seattle...The Mariners, lattes, etc.
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Post by billswoman on Nov 16, 2005 12:23:51 GMT -5
I'm on a roll. Here's chapter five: www.fanfiction.net/s/2662215/5/(I posted this reply, then got the chapter done, so came back to modify it with the link.)
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Post by MrsMaxwell on Nov 16, 2005 13:00:17 GMT -5
OMG! I meant I like how you stuck in all those refernces to Seattle, not SUCK the references....gotta use the spell-checker!
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Post by billswoman on Nov 16, 2005 13:09:50 GMT -5
LOL, I knew that's what you meant!
Leave me a review via ff.net, if you feel so moved; I need at least ONE, now, don't I? Pretty please? So I know I'm not wasting my time? Granted, I'm enjoying the story myself, but still... reviews are all the reward we fanfic writers get!
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Post by MrsMaxwell on Nov 16, 2005 14:34:43 GMT -5
I left a review for ya... Did you ever notice, all of Pam's "action shots" are with Bill? It seems like all of her scenes with Ralph are on a sofa or in a car....hmmmmm
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Post by billswoman on Nov 16, 2005 14:53:34 GMT -5
LOL, good point! I love that grin on Bill's face there, and earlier when Pam yells, Hold it! Freeze your face! in the same inflection that Bill had used.
What is it he tells her in the pilot, when she asks where the on-switch is of the gun? "Just aim it at people and look mean!" ?
And thank ye kindly for the review!
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Post by billswoman on Nov 16, 2005 21:13:50 GMT -5
Bill: Hey, Pam! I heard we're gonna DO IT. Pam: Do what? Bill: You know, IT! Pam: Where's Ralph all this time? Bill: Who gives a crap? Pam: Far out. Here's a story update: I've got seven chapters posted, for a total of 16,542 words (chapters 3 and 7 are the biggies). Chapter Eight will be the final one before the story then diverges to either a T rating (13+) or an MA rating (18+). BOTH will offer the same ending/wrap-up to the story, so you won't miss anything to do with the plot if you read one but not the other. The only difference is one's going to be a LOT more, uh... DETAILED when Pam and Bill (finally) get together. Heh. And a note to all Bill fans and Pam fans: When I write scenes like this, and I've been told by many that I do an EXCELLENT job, I like to do from BOTH points-of-view... so this won't be just Bill-intensive. If I do it right, you Pam fans should, um... ENJOY it, yeah, that's it! On the adult fan fiction site I archive to, they have something FF.net doesn't: a voting system. ALL of my stories there are rated FIVE out of FIVE.... that's how good I am. If you're curious, you can see my stories' summaries at www.adultfanfiction.net/aff/authors.php?no=1296773430 (one of which is my "Lilacs, Mr Maxwell" missing scene.) That link does NOT lead to any nasty stories; it's my author profile, and has summaries of my stories (including warnings of content, which the site requires, so you don't get an unpleasant surprise). A review and/or vote, if you read any of them, would be most appreciated. One more thing: After 8's been posted, I'm not posting any more till BOTH endings are finished, then I'll be putting them up simultaneously. That way you can freely pick and choose, not just go with the first one up so you can see how the story ends. OK, on to Chapter Eight.
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Post by billswoman on Nov 16, 2005 23:10:54 GMT -5
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Post by billswoman on Nov 17, 2005 15:26:20 GMT -5
I'm still waiting to post the concluding two chapters of the T-rated version to ff.net, but if you really can't wait and want to see how it all ends, you can read Chapters Nine and Ten on my livejournal: Chapter Nine: www.livejournal.com/users/trek_grrl/45468.htmlChapter Ten: www.livejournal.com/users/trek_grrl/45725.htmlThese two are both T-rated (13+). The MA-rated version, like I've mentioned, will conclude the same way, it'll just be a LOT more detailed, heh I'm taking a break before starting that version/ending. I'm going to copy/paste a bit of the T-rated version over, so if you read both, don't be surprised and wonder if you're experiencing deja vu.
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Post by billswoman on Nov 17, 2005 20:06:27 GMT -5
Don't read any further if you're not interested in the MA (18+) ending to this story. ..... ..... ..... ..... Okay, if you've read this far, I'll tell you about this... I've posted chapters One through Nine to the adultfanfiction.net site, and it's going to get real fun, for Pam and Bill, from Chapter Ten and beyond. Before you go to the link, here's the relevant information, just so you're not surprised by anything that'll squick you out. Title: To the Wild Country Author: sasunnach9 (My nym on this site) Summary: Bill Maxwell and Pam Davidson team up to save something very important to them both. Rating: MA 18+ (NC-17)...eventually Pairing(s): Bill Maxwell/Pam Davidson (oh, and Pam/Ralph too, but who cares?) Feedback: Reviews and a Vote would ROCK! Characters: Bill, Pam, Ralph, Rabbit, Airhead, Kathryn, a handful of others that nobody cares about Betas: Kos (Another nym; they like beta readers for some reason) Author’s notes: The first 9 chapters of this is pretty vanilla and rated 13+. At Chapter 10, it turns 18+ and the fun begins. It's actually got a plot, too. *Disclaimer: I own nothing to do with The Greatest American Hero. The original characters, primarily Rabbit and Airhead, are mine. No money whatsoever has been made from the writing of this story, from this chapter to any subsequent ones. I also own nothing to do with the songs cited to John Denver ("To the Wild Country"), or to Bob Seger ("We've Got Tonight"). DETAILS: (This is where authors put the warnings, about what content will be included... if any of this grosses you out, don't read it. I'm going to write this the way *I* want to write it, and I ain't going to have them doing anything that'd gross me out, obviously, so it'll still be pretty vanilla for some people's tastes.) "Greatest American Hero. Pam Davidson, Bill Maxwell get together, to save something important to them both, and for some great sex. Turns MA 18 at Ch 10 and beyond. M/F,Bond (police cuffs),H/C,Oral, mild Spank" THIS LINK GOES DIRECTLY TO THE STORY: www.adultfanfiction.net/aff/story.php?no=544205860Heh. Enjoy. Review and Rating (Vote, 1 to 5) would rule. (Oh, btw... H/C means "hurt/comfort", nothing nasty; Pam's hurt, and wants Bill's comfort--you'd have to read it to understand how this works into the story, it's not what you think.)
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Post by MelMac on Nov 17, 2005 23:19:28 GMT -5
I read the T+ rated version, billswoman, and it was very good (I'll be honest, I don't think I'll be able to read the other version. I was blushing at the T+ rated one. ) Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the challenge of having to write with you as well when we start up a new story thread.
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Post by billswoman on Nov 18, 2005 1:01:04 GMT -5
I read the T+ rated version, billswoman, and it was very good (I'll be honest, I don't think I'll be able to read the other version. I was blushing at the T+ rated one. ) Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the challenge of having to write with you as well when we start up a new story thread. Oh my, if the T-rated one made you blush, the next one would kill you Glad you enjoyed it though, thanks for the input! And I did SUCH a good job staying within the parameters of 13+, too, I'm quite proud of myself! (I've got a few stories that kind of wander into M 16+ land... but I always give warnings too). I'm taking a wee break before finishing the other version; that'll prolly happen tomorrow (Friday) sometime. I'm just all wrote out right now, writing what I did for the T-rated version was grueling. I'd been hoping to finish it in one sitting, but that wasn't going to happen.
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Post by MelMac on Nov 18, 2005 1:20:22 GMT -5
Oh my, if the T-rated one made you blush, the next one would kill you Thanks for the warning, billswoman. It's not that I have a problem reading stories of such (I did read the MA one on "Lilacs II"), but being who I am, some things I tend to blush at more than others.
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Post by billswoman on Nov 18, 2005 1:51:18 GMT -5
When you say Lilacs II, do you mean the M-rated missing chapter 9?
The only other MA for GAH I've done was the Missing Scene for the actual ep of "Lilacs, Mr. Maxwell." It's AFTER the talkshow taping, when O'Neil drives Bill home...then they jump ahead a couple of weeks to the restaurant scene with Bill, O'Neil, Ralph and Pam.
I just re-read the T-rated version, and I can see why some would blush. And I know what you mean; some things I just can't read. Heck, I still haven't been able to watch this Robert Culp movie, lol! SEEING him, um... well NAKED, I'm having a difficult time doing that, believe it or not. I almost did a couple days ago, and I chickened out, lol... I'm such a sillyhead.
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Post by MelMac on Nov 18, 2005 1:57:52 GMT -5
When you say Lilacs II, do you mean the M-rated missing chapter 9? The only other MA for GAH I've done was the Missing Scene for the actual ep of "Lilacs, Mr. Maxwell." It's AFTER the talkshow taping, when O'Neil drives Bill home...then they jump ahead a couple of weeks to the restaurant scene with Bill, O'Neil, Ralph and Pam. I just re-read the T-rated version, and I can see why some would blush. And I know what you mean; some things I just can't read. Heck, I still haven't been able to watch this Robert Culp movie, lol! SEEING him, um... well NAKED, I'm having a difficult time doing that, believe it or not. I almost did a couple days ago, and I chickened out, lol... I'm such a sillyhead. Yes, that's the one I'm referring to. Sorry, I seem to get a bit mixed up lately. I guess it's because I'm going traveling for a couple of days, and my head is slightly in the clouds. You can see that with some of my screencap quotes.
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Post by billswoman on Nov 18, 2005 1:59:47 GMT -5
I totally dig about getting ready to travel; that's how I felt all last week, leading up to my Chicago trip (which was a blast, BTW, seeing the boy!)
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