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Post by deadzoneleaperhero on May 29, 2006 13:29:43 GMT -5
OK, I know there have been numerous threads about how a new GAH series would work, who would get the suit, who would be the new characters, etc... I am just gonna write my own version, whether it goes against the grain or not with popular thinking...
RIght now, I am on Page 7, it is called The Next Greatest American Hero - Third Suit's The Charm... There will be a lot of backstory in it before the new hero gets the jammies or even introduced. A new villain will be introduced also, it will tie in with Ralph and Bill's first night in the desert, and one of Holly's first missions will be crucial in regards to the villain (Her fate will be decided as well). The story will eventually take place in 2006 , but as I said, I need to tell it chronologically... I am kinda making it up as I go, but I was wondering where I could post the first 7 pages I have so far, and see if ppl think it is worth continuing, regardless of whether ppl agree with my suit "scenario" for the new hero...
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Post by MelMac on May 29, 2006 15:33:19 GMT -5
OK, I know there have been numerous threads about how a new GAH series would work, who would get the suit, who would be the new characters, etc... I am just gonna write my own version, whether it goes against the grain or not with popular thinking... RIght now, I am on Page 7, it is called The Next Greatest American Hero - Third Suit's The Charm... There will be a lot of backstory in it before the new hero gets the jammies or even introduced. A new villain will be introduced also, it will tie in with Ralph and Bill's first night in the desert, and one of Holly's first missions will be crucial in regards to the villain (Her fate will be decided as well). The story will eventually take place in 2006 , but as I said, I need to tell it chronologically... I am kinda making it up as I go, but I was wondering where I could post the first 7 pages I have so far, and see if ppl think it is worth continuing, regardless of whether ppl agree with my suit "scenario" for the new hero... Sounds interesting, deadzoneleaperhero. These stories are a challenge, and I'd like to see your take on it. Recently, I wrote a new suit wearer story where Ralph and Pam's daughter, named Aidan, gets the suit. Holly was a dream in my version, which helped set up the exchange. (But, I've always felt she was such given the was the "GAHeroine" pilot was filmed. ) Most of the comments I've gotten have been positive, so I'd say go for it. If you're interested in reading my take, here's the link to it is: www.fanfiction.net/s/2914239/1/ As far as posting the chapters on the site, I don't know, you'd have to ask the mods. I also beta (proof/give advice), so if you'd like me to read it, PM me and I can give you my e-mail address.
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Post by deadzoneleaperhero on May 29, 2006 16:30:44 GMT -5
Cool, I'd like to read it....
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Post by deadzoneleaperhero on May 29, 2006 20:08:24 GMT -5
OK, I sent it MelMac...
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Post by MelMac on May 29, 2006 20:11:55 GMT -5
Cool. I'll send you a response when I get it and then another when I finish reading the first part.
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Post by MelMac on May 29, 2006 21:21:59 GMT -5
Just read it and sent you a PM. Looks good, and it'll be interesting to see where it ends up.
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Post by Ms Boku on May 29, 2006 22:09:23 GMT -5
I am half way through my next chapter. Well I'm off to get 2 hours of sleep before my day so ttfn
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